The MermaidUP and spoke the bonny mermaid,
Wi the comb and the glass in her hand; Says, Cheer up your hearts, my mariners all, You are not very far from the land. And the raging seas do foam, foam, And the stormy winds do blow, While we poor sailors must mount to the top, When the landsmen they lye low. Out and spoke the captain of our ship, And a fine little man was he; ‘O I’ve a wife in fair London town, And a widow this night she shall be.’ Out and spoke the mate of our ship, And a tight little man was he; ‘O I’ve a wife in Dublin city, And a widow this night she shall be.’ Out and spoke our second mate, And a clever little man was he; ‘Oh I have a wife in Greenoch town, And a widow this night she shall be.’ Out and spoke our little prentice boy, And a fine little boy was he; ‘Oh I am sorry for my mother,’ he said, ‘As you are for your wives all three.’ Out and spoke the cook of our ship, And a rusty old dog was he; Says, I am as sorry for my pats and my pans As you are for your wives all three. |
Annotating the Ballad |
I wasn't happy with how the page was going at all above and so I went back to my iPad to thumbnail a similar idea but different.
I took inspiration from the Jill Calder book page to the left which limits the page to simply knights and horses. Thus I made the presence of the man and horse more dominant on the left page. I also limited what was on the following page to seagulls which was inspired by the below Jill Calder page from her book Coorie Doon. |
I felt that something was missing from this spread and flipping through Jill Calder's Robert the Bruce King of Scots book I felt that more violent marks would better illude to violence that's within the story.
These splat marks on jill Calder's page inspired me to make my own splat marks, which I then added to the feet around the man's legs. |